She stepped out and died. Opened her eyes to free air, free sun and freedom. But the bird had forgotten, that, her best friend was the open sky and not the cage where she had been confined all her life.
Does this even qualify for 55 words or less? Please react. This is MY first attempt.
It's 40 words. Not bad for the first time!
Include the question at the end of it begging for comments, and then it's 56.
You go girl!
Poor bird. My sympathies are with her. God bless the bird's soul and your brain too for writing this.
you need to reveal climax in last line to make it effective..may be if you could put the first line at the end
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